Thursday, February 5, 2009

Step Up To Writing by Suzie, Grade 2

The following are the best reconstructions of these sweet little girls’ writing assignment they read to me today.

Once upon a time there was a monster and he had really big ears and really big eyes. He didn’t have a lot of friends. He was scary. He got magic and he got small ears and small eyes and now he is happy and has lots of friends. Da end. – “Suzie” age 8

Once upon a time, there was a princess and she had high heels and she lived in a castle and the castle was full of bubbles. She went down the stairs and she didn’t know that there was bubbles and she popped them with her shoes and she was scared but she was ok. The end. – “Clareese” age 8


I love the imagination mixed with the realizations of today’s culture. We have to have the right size features, or obviously princesses must wear heels. hahahaha

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